Tuesday, December 6, 2011

The magical land

Once upon a time in a land far away there was a village,a very small village. In that village there were two children their names were Lily and Jack. Lily had long brown hair and Jack was tall with black hair.
Jack was brave and Lily had many fears.
They lived with their father who was very poor. Every day the children would use their last pennies and go and buy some food from the village.
One cold day Lily was walking down the street when she spotted an old man, Jack was in the bakery getting some bread,when he came out he got a shock! The old man made the children disappear into a sugar sparkling ginger bread house. Lily was very smart and she figured out that the old man was a wizard.They tried to find their way back but they couldn't. They were trapped. So they had to stay the night in the ginger bread house.
The next morning Lily was looking for help when she saw a garden,the smell was wonderful she couldn't help not going to it.When she got there,she saw heaps of flowers and trees especially manuka trees. Jack was looking for food. Lily called ''Jack look what I've found''What''? He came running Lily showed him the garden he was amazed.That night while the children were eating some delicious lollies with hot chocolate they had figured out a plan.The plan wasn't easy but it was worth it. Every day they keep on seeing an eagle flying around. The eagle was gigantic and the children were pretty sure that they could both sit on it.So they fed the eagle each day and tried to convince the eagle to give them a ride back home.They kept feeding the bird for ages and finally it let them on him. Lily suddenly cried out ''I'm scared of eagles'''' There fine this ones friendly, come on, hop on''said Jack, Lily slowly hopped on the eagle and he flew them back to their father. The children got known as brilliant children.

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